Year 1 notes

Overall: I think they illustrate the idea in a good way because they let us see what happened in every scene. Ray introduced scene 1 in a great details. We, as audiences, can understand what they are doing with their notes. However, I think it might be better if they show us what they are going to say. Having some more examples might be better to let us in more of a understanding part. Also, I think it will be better if they show the whole scene, like running through every scene. Then, we know what’s there and what’s not. But I like the idea of having separate stages to show the split of the two couples. The idea is really clever. However, if they can have the two stages in the end, that can be even more interesting because it repeats the overall. It can create a repetition of revealing love is dangerous.